I made another image to spread. This time about the pre-teen pool children as "entertainment". Source included.

I made another image to spread. This time about the pre-teen pool children as "entertainment". Source included. ( sli.mg )

submitted 2016-12-10T14:10:00 by Swede

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quantokitty 2016-12-10T14:31:38

I like it, but (there's always a but) here are a couple of suggestions.

Replace "small" children, with "underage" children.
Enlarge that entire highlighted phrase.

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Swede 2016-12-10T14:45:47

Thanks for the suggestions.

I initially thought about enlarging that part, but doing so would block other parts of the e-mail, so to avoid making people believe I left out the surrounding context I decided to only highlight it instead.

Is it okay if I send you a PM the next time I'm designing an image like this? You can give me your input and I can make live changes. It's a good method I believe.

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quantokitty 2016-12-10T15:19:01

I understand, but you can block out the other parts. It's done all the time in advertising. You're calling attention to the pertinent part.

Yeah, sure. Feel free to run it by me if you think it'll help.

Thanks for doing this.

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