WakingUpisHardToDo

Amazing work I just love this! Have a few minor edits but nothing substantial. Will share in the morning as this mama has to go to bed. But Wow...really really well done :-). This is going to be a great tool for redpilling!

privatepizza

Bump bump !! Can't believe you managed to get so much information into that space. Bravo !!!

It reads very easily, I like that it's non emotional and factual and it seems you've included the best information for red-pilling. It's excellent. I love that you started off by talking about your children and being a mum, that'll instantly create a connection with parents. Parents are an important group to target and you've covered that very well.

I like it a lot !! Here's wishing you all the best with it, and I can't wait to see the next proof (if you post a follow up after the feedback from everyone). Kudos!

UnicornsAndSparkles

Thank you very much for the lovely feedback :) Parents could definitelybe key to helping spread this.

Silverlining

Bump! The text runs over the margins in some places. You plan to fold it three times. Which is going to be the front page? The warning? Great effort. Kudos. I've pinged the others - only the first five pings in any one post go through - and don't go through on an edit.

UnicornsAndSparkles

Thank you for the encouragement and kind words!

Littleredcorvette

If you could add a little blurb somewhere promoting the new Seth rich v/, that would be great!

Some teaser like

"Is SR's death related to PG? Find out more at (link here) "

sensitive

Upvoat for this work and the comments!

UnicornsAndSparkles

Thank you sensitive :)

Pizzalawyer

Maybe just comment that the current broadbased investigation has discovered pedophilia amongst persons of all political persuasions, it's just not the Democrats. I'm verbose so a challenge for me is always making a point succinctly. You can probably do better than me in making the bipartisan or universal nature of pedophelia. You did a great job fitting alot of info on a 3 part folding flyer.

Pizzalawyer

Oh no no no, mum is just fine, it gave you away that's all. Americans will just think that Savile is par for the course with those royal Brita and their ilk. Whereas Americans need to be reminded of the elite pedophilia in our own backyard

Pizzalawyer

U&S: I've made up brochures myself and appreciate the effort that goes into such a task. You are to be commended. And I for one would have no problem purchasing and distributing such a brochure. I have some comments to make but fear I might give offense and so I apologize in advance. 1) I would not mention VOATs problems, it's too speculative to suggest it's going under. It remains a thriving Internet community that I feel confident will overcome its problems. So just encourage folks to go to VOAT and see the tremendous research and news updates that can be found there. 2) are you British what with the use of "mum" ? If so the Savile reference is OK but for USA audience I would suggest referring to the Franklin scandal and the DC scandal involving capitol pages and the Epstein case, all of which were covered by MSM.

3) The brochure makes it sound like only democrats are involved in pizzagate crimes, I think partisanship should be toned down, maybe even eliminated. 4) Hillary's involvement is not only the Silsby case but her suppression of investigative efforts when one of her own ambassadors was involved in sexual exploitation, Harold Gutzman???5) now that the Seth Rich story is beginning to take hold, I would provide the readers with the VOAT site to go to for following developments in his murder case 6) the evolution of pizzagate is not entirely clear . It started out as an online investigation into a potential sex ring involving the Podestas and Alefantis in which pleas for a proper law enforcement investigation fell on deaf ears but now refers to a movement of community of researchers addressing issues of sexual exploitation in our country by persons in positions of power and trust. In otherwords assuming it was fake news back in the Fall of 2016 its definitely not fake news now. Of course we don't need to ever concede that it was ever fake news. I'm just suggesting that you impress upon the reader that while it might have involved a single sex ring in the beginning pizzagate is now a movement tracking the problem of pedophilia everywhere etc etc

7) Sexual exploitation does not equal murder and organ harvesting. That is pretty heavy duty stuff to absorb and I think it should be downplayed. If the brochure succeeds in getting the reader to go online they'll learn in due course that child abuse in the extreme can lead to murder and organ harvesting. You might just want to say that during the course of the citizens investigation, murder and even organ harvesting have been uncovered. Thanks for youbefforts once again.

UnicornsAndSparkles

Please, no offence taken, this is exactly the kind of feedback I want!

1) Voat problems gone

2) Yes Im from UK, should I change to mother? I felt mum was more personal. Someone else mentioned covering Franklin but didnt get back with what to cover on it but is something I can look into more myself and add.

3) How do I tone down the Democraticness? As above I am from UK so more knowledgeable on our government

4) I did mention covering for an ambassador, is this the same man? Will investigate Harold further.

5) include Voat link for Seth investigation.

6) I did ask for little help with the explanation as I found it a little overwhelming to put to paper, yes what I have described is the early days and nowhere near the story we have now, however i tried t make it as simple as possible as a primer for non believers who will hopefully work there way to the facts.

It started out as an online investigation into a potential sex ring involving the Podestas and Alefantis in which pleas for a proper law enforcement investigation fell on deaf ears but now refers to a movement of community of researchers addressing issues of sexual exploitation in our country by persons in positions of power and trust.

I like this and will edit into my What Is Pizzagate?

7) @carmencita suggets removing this also. I agree with you both. It is too scary of a read for average joe, and as you say if they do go online and fact check, they will quickly stumble upon the horrifying truth.